The Lovely Laura
Downtrodden Native
So I heard Trey likes asians... *teehee*
Posts: 93
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Haikus
Jun 6, 2005 6:49:22 GMT -5
Post by The Lovely Laura on Jun 6, 2005 6:49:22 GMT -5
I was looking at the haikus...I totally forgot that I submitted five! But I noticed my Orgazmo one is 5-6-5 when it comes to syllables. So, Vaughn, can you change the fifth verse to "Give it to me, you big stud!" ? Thanks a bunch!
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Haikus
Jun 6, 2005 18:32:24 GMT -5
Post by iamthejam on Jun 6, 2005 18:32:24 GMT -5
LOL! I never bothered to count the syllables. Maybe I will next time. I'll do it as soon as I make an update. I don't want the next one to be about a few syllables in a hiaku. LOL!
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Haikus
Sept 8, 2008 17:59:58 GMT -5
Post by wowposter on Sept 8, 2008 17:59:58 GMT -5
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Haikus
Sept 9, 2008 7:32:41 GMT -5
Post by wowposter on Sept 9, 2008 7:32:41 GMT -5
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